this really is a spectacular story. the character build-up is great, how you deal with both their insecurities is nothing short of beautiful. the tension is tangible. you should definitely keep writing, it's one of the best stories i've read in a long time.
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2005-09-06 04:38 am (UTC)